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满分句型养成
问题1.如何让表达更具体、更具有画面感 Specific
方法： 用状语从句，为事情的发生铺垫背景
(1)When I arrived at Wander Theme Park(万达乐园),I felt quiet hungry.
(提供时间背景)
(2)If you take a ride in Wheel of Flames(风火飞轮),you can feel extremely free.
(提供条件背景)
(3)I chose to take Rig Hazard(钻塔急坠),so that I could take a birds-eye view of the theme park.
(提供目的背景)
(4) I recommend watching the play in Feishui Theatre (淝水剧场)，because it offers grand scerce.
(提供原因背景)
(5) Although Mountain Spiash(急流勇进) is a popular project, it can make our bodies wet through.
(提供递进背景)
方法：用定语从句让主句中的人物、事物、时间、地点形象更饱满，描述更精确
问题2：如何让表达更有机、更有容量?Organic
答：用名词性从句，非谓语，省略句
(1)What I experienced in the park has left a deep impression on my mind.
(2)I believe that the project Big wheel(摩天轮) is most amusing.
(3) I love the project called Soaring with Dragon.(白龙飞天)
◎ Riding Soaring with Dragon supplies me a feeling of flying.
◎ To entertain myself, I took a ride on Anhui in the Air.(飞越安徽)
(4) While (I was) taking photos, I found that the battery of my iphone lost its power.
问题3：如何让表达更地道 Idiomatic
1)用固定短语表达从句：
2)用感叹句
How exciting it is to overlook the theme park!
What a grand (壮观的)scene it is!
3)用“如此…以致”句
The packed lunch was so expensive that I coundn´t afford it!
4)用强调句型
It was you that comforted me to calm down |
