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0w.net 认真分析历届高考英语作文题型，我们不难发现，迄今为止，无非是看图、看表格的记叙、说明、议论文或者传统的开放性叙述文。题材和体裁千变万化，不变的是众考官对“美文共赏析”的一致。然而，高考作文并无标准答案，也无绝对定式可言，谁能恰如其分地紧扣命题的要求，能淋漓尽致地表述自己的所想，谁就是胜者。很多老师认为，Practice makes perfect. 平日里多练练高考作文一定能起到“知彼知己，百战不殆”的效果。但是，对于高一、高二的学生来说，由于缺乏有效的训练，这样的办法不利于从根本上提高自己的表述能力，反而常常令他们觉得无话可说、无的放矢，继而造成谈“文”色变的惧怕心理。从事英语教学工作多年，我认为倘若能够多角度、多途径、贴近生活、与时俱进地为学生提供自由表达的平台，方能够帮助学生在写作中有的放矢，于无形中提高他们写作的兴趣和自信心，从而为尝试高难度的高考题型搭建云梯。在实践中我主要坚持升华情感、“煽动”气氛的方法鼓励学生积极配合写作，取得了良好的效果。下面举例说明：特殊时期的情感表达各种节日、纪念日、活动日本身都是良好的作文命题。尤其以中国人来说，自古以来我们都是“每逢佳节倍思亲”，教师就应该不失时机地“煽情”，让学生尝试用英语自由表达对家人、朋友的感激和思念，帮助他们将精彩的句型加以整合，总结出感人至深的文章。例如：在感恩节期间，介绍节日的由来和风俗之后，我安排命题作文一则：“express your thanks to somebody”下面是选出的学生作文A thousand thanks to my parentsDear Mom and Dad,Thank you for giving birth to me, and let me see how beautiful the world is. You have ginen me the knowledge which I can't learn from the book. I feel you are the most wonderful parents in the world. And when I think of you, my heart is filled with warmth. Now Thanks Giving Day is drawing near, so I want to thank you for all your loving support.Thank you for bringing me up. I know it is no easy thing to do, so thank you for all the great efforts you made and are still making. You are my first teachers, you give me knowledge all the time, teach me how to tell right from wrong, and how to be a good girl.I also want to thank you for encouraging me. You give me love and help me find the sun. Every time I was down, you would always come around and get my feet back on the ground.I don't know how to require you for your love. It's a lucky thing that you are my patents. I love you, Dad and Mom, and your love will be with me forever!Love, Your daughter Thank the Lord, thank me, and thank yourselfThank the Lord. He gives me life and a house with bed, food and drink. But who really does it? Is it the Lord? It’s illogical. Why so many people are starving but the Lord doesn’t help them? It’s we ourselves who should be thanked. We grow food and build houses with hands which belong to us. Why do we still depend on the Lord? It is our job to make our life wonderful and happy because we have our own ability and wisdom which come from our daily experience. Self-help is the best help. Remember it!Thank yourself to make yourself more confident, because you should believe that only you will set up the condition suitable to you. You will become your own Lord.就热点、趣味问题的想象、辩论学生之所以写不出作文，不仅仅是由于缺乏想象力，更是因为教师的调动不到位、不能激发兴奋点、引起共鸣所致。对于身边的、新近发生的新闻、时事，教师可以去粗取精，有选择地截取一个命题，在课堂上组织学生讨论，将有说服力的论点、论据罗列、总结，再安排学生课后连词成句，即成美文一篇。常此以往，形成习惯，下笔时即可文思泉涌。例如，在讲 “Table Manners”一文时，可安排学生讨论“Table manners at our school dining hall”；讲“Modern technology”时，不妨让学生讨论关于克隆技术的利弊。任何激烈的讨论无非是达成一致或者兵分三路：正、反、中立方。对此，教师不妨少做条框设置，鼓励自由想象。Opinion ICloning is one of the modern technologies that have recently been developed.It can help us in many ways. For example, if you lose one of your legs, you can clone one, that means that you needn't worry about being disabled.But each coin has two sides; cloning also has its disadvantage. If we are short of something, we clone it at once. I think nature will not keep its balance any more. So cloning is not always a good thing.Everyone has his opinion, but all in all, our life will become better and better.Opinion IIAs the technology is improving faster and faster, human beings have made rapid progress in science and technology, for example, cloning.I don't know how others think about cloning, but as for me, cloning shouldn't be put into use widely.There's no doubt that everyone does want to live longer. But if there are no deaths and mothers keep on giving birth to babies, the balance of our nature will be broken. You can't imagine how the future will be like with so large a population. That means, the more people, the more pollution and the fewer resources. So in view of our future generation and our habitat, we must put a ban to cloning. Surely cloning is a symbol of advanced technology and it has played an important role in some parts of modern science, but if we don't use it in a proper way, the whole world will be a total mess. To sum up, we'd better not use cloning unless it is necessary.Opinion IIIThe word “cloning” has come into fashion since it stands for the high level of science and technology. Cloning is a new area for people to step into, but before we are looking forward to the achievement, I believe it is our duty to think about it carefully.As a newly developed technology, cloning has much to do with people's health. When part of the body doesn't work any more, cloning has made it possible to give the patient a thorough treatment by replacing the bad part with a new one, which is cloned from animal or human's cells. How extraordinary! From this point, we can go on living for a long time, yet this is not always the case. Someone holds the views that cloning may cost people too much who urgently need to use it and it is hard to tell the relationship between a mother and her cloned baby.However, I still believe cloning has more advantages over its disadvantages. Whether it is good or not, only time can tell. Meanwhile, we should encourage scientists to try the active ways in exploring the usages of cloning.总之，“教学有法而教无定法。”只要教师能够善于发现、认真思考，深入地观察和了解学生，感同身受之后帮助他们提高英语写作兴趣和树立自信心，不论采取什么命题进行训练，均能达到令人满意的效果。 来
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