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0w.net 一、确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
二、注意篇章结构
合理布局一般为三段式
开始部分——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。
三、写作技巧
1、如何开篇
技巧1：主旨设问更给力
I think it's very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it's good for our health and study.
I think it's very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it's good for living.
I think it's very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it's the most-widely used language in the world.
技巧2：从我们到我
Different people have different _____, but / and I have / prefer _____
2、如何写正文
(1)句型变化：
变化原则1：表达观点要“自我”
In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects!
变化原则2：两句之间要过渡
I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day.
变化原则3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型
普通级句型
The environment is bad.
比较级句型
The environment is getting worse and worse.
The environment is getting much worse than before.
最高级句型
I have never seen the worse environment.
变化原则4：表达作用多用it句式
Reading is a good way to relax myself.
Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.
变化原则5：增强情感转感叹
How beneficial it is for us to read!
How important it is for students to do sports.
变化原则6：事情到感情句型
I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.
It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.
变化原则7：形容词句型升级
It was an unusual experience in my life.
It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.
变化原则8：活用there be结合定从
Many reasons made me like reading.
There are many reasons why I enjoy reading
(2)词汇变化：
变化原则1：make更有feel
I made a progress in English. I feel proud.
It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English.
变化原则2：连词不再用and
增补 not only…but also…, as well as…
进阶 what's more / worse , furthermore
转折 while, however
变化原则3：喜欢不再like
用be fond of, enjoy, be crazy about
变化原则4：提出措施尽量不用should
用suppose, had better, have no choice but, it's our duty to
3、如何结尾
①各种号召——事不宜迟
Don't put it off.
②各种越来越——多多益善
the+比较级+主谓，the +比较级+主谓 越…就越…
The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be.
③名言警句
学习类 Practice makes perfect.
运动类 Rome was not built in a day.
环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.
爱好类 Interest is the best teacher. 来
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